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If you have ever been having sex and had someone say “I love you” and you knew the comment wasn’t so much directed at you as it was at your penis, but you were too into it to throw them off you and run for the door, then this is for you.
If you have ever had someone try to get you drunk because that is the only way they ever get laid, and they were drunk well before you, but you fucked them anyway because sometimes, all you want is a one night stand, this is for you also.
Lieing in bed next to a person who will never again exist
in your worl


Eleventh Frame Bar and BowlingThe Eleventh Frame Bar and BowlingEleventh Frame Bar and Bowling
Smoke suffocated the stale air, patrons
stumbled to their cars. The old oak bar gleaming under a thin layer of wax and whiskey. Bob Dylan mixed with the drunken jabber
of the bowling alley. When the call came
Kylie looked at me, she transferred the call
to the main office, mom’s office, and poured
us both a shot. Southern Comfort. Another shooting, another night of wondering, will the next funeral be my father’s? Ten years of the same night left me praying let it be him. Holding my head to her
breasts, Kylie ran her f


Work in progress: no title yet Dan used to be a big guy. apparently he used to be a big wrestler in high school. In college he started juicing. Then he hurt his back and had to lay in bed for 6 months. When he got out it looked like his muscles had all melted and turned into congealed fat. His mom had to go by him clothes because none of his fit. The kids all used to talk about how they had a buddy whose cousin was dating this guy that was the brother of a plastic surgeon who came over once a week to inject Dan with phosphatidylcholine, a druWork in progress: no title yet


tHInk you loVe me?you say you love me, do you know what that means? no, not the words but the result of those words. if they are true, you will lose weight, you eyes will sink, muscles decay. get a comfotable bed you'll need it when your lungs have to be drained of blood every twelve hours. are you ready to pay that price? still tHInk you loVe me?tHInk you loVe me?
by `scotto
by `serpentinekiss
Happiness, by
The Interview, by
Rusting Bridges of Suburbia, by
So, I did some peruzing, and earthed up these three pieces.
Happiness is beautiful in its own simplicity, and has a subtle kick to it that I find lacking in a lot of reading these days.
The Interview is an interesting little for-the-stage piece that I found myself cracking up over, all over the place. There's some great humor and dialogue going on here, as well as some great subtle toss-ins for the actors to experiment with. Something I would love to see performed.
While Rusting Bridges of Suburbia might be a little ho-hum subject-wise, the rhythm and control of meter that ~ honestbrutality has accomplished here is impeccable. It takes a lot of practice and a lot of control of vocabulary to get a good rhythm in a slam piece these days, and it's done beautifully here.
Get writing, fuckos. *jesusbite
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